Malcolm James Furst

Words, words, words

An Amazing First (last) Date

I saw her. 

We met 

and dined 

and laughed 

and drank a bit too much 

and went back to my place 

and listened to amazing music 

and she hit on me, 

so I kissed her back, 

and we rolled around, 

and the energy between us was incredible, 

but she didn’t feel it. 

She couldn’t feel it. 

It was there. 

She just. 

Couldn’t. 

Feel. 

It.

I am so sensitive.

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4 Comments»

  discob wrote @

I just love how you write your feelings out the same way as I do…

Welcome back! :)

  malcolmjames wrote @

Thank you. If only there were more souls like us.

  Farah wrote @

Mmm this one is lovely. I love the succinctness.

  malcolmjames wrote @

Thanks, Farah.


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